FINAL: Stephens Lake Park – A Green Oasis on Broadway
While I was “officially” finished with my contribution to the class’ Broadway project on Wednesday when I turned into my professor, David Rees, a disc with my “second draft” of the video, I was still not quite satisfied with it. The timing of a few things was still off.
On Thursday, I posted a third version of the video, and received some more feedback from it both in person and through a comment on the post, and took those into consideration. I was also unhappy with the color of certain clips in the video, and adjusted those within Adobe Premiere. Finally, I went back to Stephens Lake Park for one more “walk around,” which was also my last opportunity to experiment with the Canon 35mm f/1.4L lens. The result is a little tighter, with better matching between audio and visual components.
I consider this a finished piece, but am still more than happy to hear comments and suggestions.
Nice, DK!
Thanks, Val and Scott–glad to hear you like it!
I like it! I think the work you’ve done to refine this has improved it considerably, good job!
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