Broadway: Is it Finished?
Stephens Lake Park: A Green Oasis on Broadway from David Kennedy on Vimeo.
Well, just when you think you’re finished with something, people remind you that you aren’t. Yesterday, while I was choking on the seeds in some home-made bread, my picture story class attempted to watch the last draft of my essay on Stephens Lake Park. I say that they attempted to do so because, as much as I love my hosting provider (BlueHost), I don’t have access to a streaming server, and the process of loading the minute and a half video took close to ten minutes. Yikes.
A lot of people in my program have been posting their final videos on the hosting service Vimeo. For a while, I didn’t understand why: the video is great, yes, but there are ads for Vimeo all over it, and the only way to watch the videos in High Definition is on their Web site–it cannot be embedded. No one told me an account where you don’t have to deal with any of its (few) shortcomings was available for only $60 for a year!
In any event, I received some very good feedback, particularly from David Rees, Calin Ilea, Lillian Kelly, and Vivian Esparza. While I’m fine with other people introducing textual information into their documentary presentations using “text slides”–black slides with white text–I’m usually trying to avoid it for my own work. However, with some healthy dialogue and also a touch of arm twisting, I was convinced that the introductory sequences of the video needed to be changed. I think that this is, finally, “it” for the Stephens Lake Park piece.





